一、核心策略
- 紧扣话题卡
- 覆盖所有要求:Who, What they are like, How you know them, Why you admire/like/choose them
- 结构清晰
- 采用开头-主体-结尾经典结构
- 细节具体
- 用具体事例、细节和感受支撑描述
- 避免空泛形容词
- 展现词汇和语法
- 使用多样词汇(同义词替换)
- 准确语法结构(特别是时态)
- 自然流畅
- 像讲故事一样保持语流
- 适当使用连接词
- 展现情感
- 表达对人物的真实情感(敬佩、喜爱、感激等)
二、结构框架
2.1 开头句式 (Introduction - 约20-30秒)
直接点题型
- Alright, I'd like to talk about [Person's Name], who is [their relationship to you].
- The person I've decided to talk about is [Person's Name].
- For this topic, I'm going to describe [Person's Name].
背景引入型
- Thinking about someone I truly admire, [Person's Name] immediately springs to mind.
- When I saw this topic, I knew straight away I wanted to talk about [Person's Name].
- I'd like to tell you about a person who embodies [quality] for me, and that person is [Person's Name].
强调重要性型
- There are many interesting people in my life, but one who stands out particularly is [Person's Name].
- I find this topic quite meaningful because it gives me a chance to talk about [Person's Name].
2.2 主体部分描述 (Body - 约1分半钟)
人物身份与关系 (Who & How you know them)
- As I mentioned, [Person's Name] is my [relationship].
- I first got to know [him/her] back in [Year] when we [situation].
- Our paths crossed [situation] about [Number] years ago.
外貌 (Physical Appearance - 如相关)
常用词汇:
Well-presented
approachable
radiant smile
expressive eyes
athletic build
distinctive features
句式NOTES:
- When it comes to his appearance, he's quite tall with a athletic build.
- She has very expressive eyes and a friendly smile that lights up her face.
- What people notice first about him is his distinctive hairstyle and confident posture.
- Physically, she's quite petite with delicate features and a warm complexion.
- He carries himself with a lot of confidence, which makes him stand out in a crowd.
性格与品质 (Personality & Character - 核心!)
句式结构
- In terms of personality, what strikes me most about [him/her] is [his/her] [Quality 1] and [Quality 2].
- [Person's Name] is remarkably [Adjective describing character].
积极品质词汇:
Kind-hearted
generous
supportive
encouraging
patient
understanding
Humorous
intelligent
wise
creative
passionate
determined
resilient
描述方式
- He/She has an amazing ability to [specific ability].
- For instance, there was this one time when [讲述一个具体事例,说明该品质]. This really showed me how [quality] [he/she] is.
能力与成就 (Talents & Achievements - 如相关)
- Beyond [his/her] personality, [he/she] is also exceptionally talented at [e.g., playing the piano/cooking/giving advice].
- Professionally, [he/she] has achieved [mention significant but relevant achievement], which is a testament to [his/her] [e.g., hard work/creativity].
原因与影响 (Why you admire/like/choose them - 核心!)
- The main reason I really admire [him/her] is because [he/she] has taught me the importance of [e.g., kindness/perseverance/being true to oneself].
- I deeply appreciate [his/her] [e.g., dedication to his family/her unwavering honesty/his sense of humor even in tough times].
- [He/She] has had a profound influence on me, particularly in terms of [e.g., how I approach challenges/my perspective on life/my career choices].
2.3 结尾句式 (Conclusion - 约10-15秒)
总结感受型
- So, to sum up, [Person's Name] is truly an [e.g., exceptional individual/inspiring figure/remarkable friend], and I feel very fortunate to have [him/her] in my life.
- All in all, describing [Person's Name] reminds me just how much I value [his/her] [核心品质] and the positive impact [he/she] has had on me.
展望未来型
- I look forward to maintaining our friendship/connection for many years to come and learning even more from [him/her].
简洁收尾型
- That's a bit about [Person's Name] and why [he/she] means a lot to me.
2.4 案例分析
家人案例:描述一位家人(如母亲)
- 开头:I'd like to talk about my mother, who has been my biggest supporter throughout my life.
- 性格品质:She's incredibly selfless and resilient. Even when she was working full-time, she always made time to help me with my studies.
- 具体事例:Last year when I was stressed about university applications, she stayed up late every night helping me revise my personal statement, even though she was exhausted from work.
- 影响:Her dedication taught me the importance of perseverance and compassion, which has shaped how I approach challenges.
老师案例:描述一位老师(如高中英语老师)
- 开头:The person I admire most is my high school English teacher, Mr. Zhang, who inspired me to love literature.
- 性格品质:He was extremely passionate and patient, always finding creative ways to make Shakespeare plays engaging for teenagers.
- 具体事例:Once, I failed an essay and was ready to give up, but he spent an entire lunch break explaining my mistakes and encouraging me to try again. That one conversation changed my attitude towards learning.
- 影响:His belief in me gave me the confidence to pursue English literature at university, and I still apply his teaching methods when helping others.
名人案例:描述一位公众人物(如科学家屠呦呦)
- 开头:I'd like to describe Tu Youyou, the Nobel Prize-winning scientist who discovered artemisinin.
- 性格品质:She's a perfect example of perseverance and humility. Despite facing countless failures in her research, she never gave up.
- 具体事例:Her team worked for years under difficult conditions, testing hundreds of herbal remedies before finally finding the effective treatment for malaria.
- 影响:Her story teaches me that true success comes from dedication to helping others, not just personal glory.
三、时态重点 (Tense Focus - 极易出错!)
描述当前状态/永久特点 (General Truths/Permanent Characteristics): 使用一般现在时 (Simple Present)
- He is my uncle. (身份关系 - 永久)
- She has a great sense of humor. (性格特点 - 相对永久)
描述过去事件 (Past Events - 相识、具体事例): 使用一般过去时 (Simple Past), 过去进行时 (Past Continuous)
- We first met in 2015 at university. (相识 - 过去特定时间点)
- Last week, she helped me prepare for my exam when I was feeling overwhelmed. (具体事例 - 过去动作)
描述持续到现在的状态或经历: 使用现在完成时 (Present Perfect)
- We have known each other for over ten years. (从过去持续到现在的关系)
时态易错点提醒
- 混淆现在时和过去时:描述人物当前性格用现在时;描述过去事件用过去时
- 在具体事例中忘记用过去时:For example, last month he helps me... ❌ → For example, last month he helped me... ✅
四、额外Tips
- 准备2-3个核心人物:覆盖不同类别(家人、朋友、老师、同事、名人等)
- 为每个人物准备1-2个具体事例:例子不必宏大,但要能生动体现其品质
- 录音练习:严格计时2分钟,检查流利度、语法错误(特别是时态!)
- 模拟考官提问:思考Part 3可能的深入问题(如你认为榜样对年轻人重要吗?)
- 不要背诵全文:记住框架、关键词汇和事例,现场自然组织语言
- 总结:成功的Part 2人物描述 = 清晰结构 + 覆盖所有要点 + 具体细节/事例 + 准确时态 + 丰富词汇 + 自然流利 + 真实情感
雅思口语评分标准
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流利度与连贯性
Fluency & Coherence
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词汇多样性
Lexical Resource
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语法准确性
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
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发音
Pronunciation