光华启迪英语组-薛老师
在雅思写作中,频繁使用 "X accounted for 15%" 这样的结构会显得单调。我们的目标是使用丰富的词汇和句式,将百分比信息融入更复杂的句子中,展示语言能力。
这些是最高频且最安全的替换方式。
这是获得高分的关键,因为它展示了用数学思维描述数据的能力。
通过与其他数据的比较来表达。
用于概括性描述,而非精确数据。
此表提供了不同百分比区间最地道的表达方式,您可以在写作中直接调用。
| 百分比区间 | 推荐表达方式 | 例句 |
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| 极小值 (1%-5%) | A tiny fraction, a negligible proportion, a mere X%, a minority, less than one in twenty |
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| 较小值 (5%-15%) | A small minority, a small segment, roughly one in ten (10%), about a tenth, a fairly small proportion |
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| 中等偏小值 (15%-30%) | Just under a third (30%), about a quarter (25%), one in four (25%), a significant minority, nearly a third |
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| 三分之一 (33%) | A third, one-third, one in three |
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| 中等值 (30%-49%) | Just under a half (50%), nearly half, a large minority, a substantial segment, over a third |
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| 一半 (50%) | A half, one-half, one in two, exactly half |
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| 中等偏大值 (51%-65%) | Just over a half, a majority, the larger part, more than half, nearly two-thirds (66%) |
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| 三分之二 (66%) | Two-thirds, two in three |
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| 较大值 (65%-75%) | About two-thirds, a large majority, a significant majority, nearly three-quarters (75%) |
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| 四分之三 (75%) | Three-quarters, three in four |
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| 极大值 (75%-99%) | The vast majority, the overwhelming majority, almost all, nearly all, a large proportion, the lion's share |
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假设一个图表显示:在线购物用户占比:年轻人(18-30岁) 88%,中年人(31-50岁) 65%,老年人(51+) 25%。
The propensity for online shopping varied dramatically across age groups. The vast majority of young adults (88%) were online shoppers, a figure that was more than three times the rate for the elderly. Among the older generation, only a quarter, or one in four, engaged in online shopping. Meanwhile, a significant majority of middle-aged consumers (65%), or roughly two in three, also participated in this activity, highlighting a clear digital divide between the youngest cohort and the rest of the population.