光华启迪英语组-薛老师
一个优秀的雅思结尾段不需要很长，通常1-3句话即可。它的核心任务是：
用不同的词语重申你的主要立场和分论点。
（可选但建议）给出建议、预测未来或强调问题的重要性。
In conclusion,...
To conclude,...
To sum up,...
Overall,...
In summary,...
All things considered,...
Therefore, it is clear that... [重申核心观点]
From the arguments and examples provided above, it is evident that...
Having considered both sides of the argument, I firmly believe that...
Thus, the evidence suggests that...
Consequently, I am of the opinion that...
（用于"讨论双方并给出自己观点"的题型） While both viewpoints have merit, I am inclined to agree that...
For the reasons mentioned above, I therefore strongly believe that... [与引言段 thesis statement 呼应]
This essay has argued that [主题] is ultimately a positive/negative development because of A and B.
As discussed, the drawbacks of [某事物] outweigh its benefits.
Therefore, it is crucial that governments/individuals/schools should...
In light of this, it is recommended that...
One possible solution would be to...
To mitigate this issue, ...
If this trend continues, it is likely that we will see...
Looking ahead, it is inevitable that [某事物] will become even more prevalent.
Failure to address this issue could lead to...
It is, therefore, of paramount importance to...
Ultimately, addressing [问题] is essential for the well-being of society/the environment.
This is an issue that deserves serious consideration from all stakeholders.
Despite the potential drawbacks, the overall impact of [某事物] is largely positive.
Nevertheless, with proper regulation and public awareness, the benefits can be maximized.
在结尾段提出一个正文中从未讨论过的新论点或例子。这是大忌！结尾段只应总结已论述的内容。
只是把引言段或题目中的句子原封不动地抄一遍，没有进行paraphrasing（改写）。
要么太长（像又写了一个主体段），要么太短（只有一句话如"In conclusion, I agree."），缺乏深度。
使用过于绝对的词汇，如 must, never, always，显得不够严谨。应多用 should, could, it is likely that 等缓和语气的词。
在"讨论双方观点"的题型中，结尾段没有明确表达自己的立场，只是简单重复了双方论点。
在最后关头出现明显的语法或拼写错误，给考官留下糟糕的最后印象。
Some people believe that the widespread use of the internet has brought more problems than benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
英文： In conclusion, I think internet has many problems and also many benefits. We should be careful when using it.
中文： 总之，我觉得互联网有很多问题也有很多好处。我们用的时候要小心。
问题分析：过于简单、重复题目、没有立场、语言不正式
英文： In conclusion, while the internet undoubtedly presents challenges such as cybercrime and the spread of misinformation, its benefits in terms of global communication, access to information, and economic development are far more significant. Therefore, I strongly disagree that it has created more problems. It is crucial that governments and educators invest in digital literacy programs to maximize its positive potential while mitigating the risks.
中文： 总之，尽管互联网无疑带来了诸如网络犯罪和错误信息传播等挑战，但它在全球通信、信息获取和经济发展方面的好处要重要得多。因此，我坚决不同意它带来的问题更多。政府和教育者投资于数字素养计划至关重要，以最大化其积极潜力，同时减轻其风险。
引导词: In conclusion
总结句式: while... undoubtedly presents..., its benefits... are far more significant. (承认对方，但强调己方)
明确立场: I strongly disagree that...
升华建议: It is crucial that... 提出了具体的建议方（governments and educators）和具体措施（digital literacy programs）。
英文： To sum up, the negative implications of the internet, particularly on mental health and social interaction, are too substantial to ignore. Despite the obvious advantages it offers, I believe that for a significant portion of the population, especially the young, the problems indeed outweigh the benefits. Consequently, a collective effort from parents, schools, and technology companies is urgently needed to promote a healthier and more balanced online culture.
中文： 总而言之，互联网的负面影响，特别是对心理健康和社会交往的影响，严重到不容忽视。尽管它提供了明显的优势，但我认为对相当一部分人，尤其是年轻人来说，确实是问题多于好处。因此，迫切需要一个由家长、学校和技术公司共同付出的努力，来推广更健康、更平衡的网络文化。
引导词: To sum up
总结句式: the negative implications... are too substantial to ignore. 和 I believe that... the problems indeed outweigh the benefits. (清晰表明立场)
升华建议: Consequently, a collective effort from... is urgently needed to... 提出了多方合作的具体建议，并点明了目标（healthier and more balanced online culture）。