句子结构错误
1.
Unemployment in early life may permanently impair young people's future employability， as patterns of behaviour and attitudes establish at an early stage tend to persist later in life.
错因：有两个谓语动词。在这里需要将 establish 这个动词变成过去分词。
Unemployment in early life may permanently impair young people's future employability， as patterns of behaviour and attitudes established at an early stage tend to persist later in life.
大意：年轻时的失业会永久地伤害其日后的就业能力，因为在人生早期所建立起来的行为和态度往往会在以后的人生阶段持续下去。
2.
Volunteering gives young people a chance discover whether they are suited to a particular line of work.
错因：句中出现两个谓语动词 give 和 discover，应该在 discover 前加 to 形成不定式。
Volunteering gives young people a chance to discover whether they are suited to a particular line of work．
大意：志愿者工作会让年轻人有机会发现自己是否适合某一个特定的工种。
3.
The factors that lead to one's success or failure in school including teachers'commitment and parents'intervention．
错因：这个句子缺乏谓语动词，应将 including 改为动词 include。
The factors that lead to one's success or failure in school include teachers，commitment and parents'intervention．
大意：导致学生在学校成功或者失败的因素包括老师的敬业和家长的参与。
4.
It has been agreed that improve academic performance is only one of the many prerequisites to success．
错因：improve 是动词，不能作从句的主语，应该用其动名词形式。
It has been agreed that improving academic performance is only one of the many prerequisites to success．
大意：人们普遍认同提高学业成绩只是达到成功的必要条件之一。
5.
Many people argue that children can increase knowledge by various means, including attending distance-learning courses，but others against.
错因：but 用于连接两个完整的句子，在这句话中 but 后面的句子缺乏谓语动词。
Many people argue that children can increase knowledge by various means，including attending distance-learning courses，but others oppose it．
大意：很多人认为孩子可以通过多种渠道获得知识，比如远程教学，然而有些人反对这样的观点。
6.
Learning the fundamentals of different subjects not only enables students to extend vision but also to identify their real learning interest.
错因：使用 not only…but also…时，前后要对称。
Learning the fundamentals of different subjects enables students not only to extend vision but also to identify their real learning interest．
大意：广泛学习各个科目的基础知识不仅可以拓宽学生的视野，而且有助于他们找到真正兴趣所在。
7.
It is now recognised that learning is stem from experience.
错因：此句同时出现动词 is 和动词词组 stem from，需将 is 去掉；表示"源于"时，与 stem 有关的常用词组为 stem from，为主动形式。
It is now recognised that learning stems from experience.
大意：现在人们都认同，学习来自于实践。
8.
The biggest obstacle to recruiting females in the army could social attitudes．
错因：谓语不完整。缺少 be 动词。
The biggest obstacle to recruiting females in the army could be social attitudes．
大意：在军队中雇用女性的最大障碍可能是社会态度的问题。
9.
It has been become harder to maintain 1iving standards far the dependent population, because the workforce is shrinking．
错因：成分多余。been 和 become 都是动词，两者取一。
It has become harder to maintain living standards for the dependent population，because the workforce is shrinking．
大意：由于劳动人口在缩小，要维持没有劳动能力的人的生活水准就变得更加困难。
10.
The traditional prejudice is that the old will take time off whereas the young will not．The oppose is found to be the case.
错因：oppose 是动词，不能作主语，应该改成名词 opposite。
The traditional prejudice is that the old will take time off whereas the young will not．The opposite is found to be the case．
大意：传统的偏见认为年纪大的员工会请假，而年轻的员工则不会。但事实刚好相反。
11.
Many regions have imposed strict rules, however，this does not automatically mean that road offences have been curbed．
错因：however 表示"但是"的时候，是副词而不是连词。
Many regions have imposed strict rules；however，this does not automatically mean that road offences have been curbed．
大意：很多地区已经实施严格的规定，然而，这并不意味着道路违规已得到控制。
12.
There are a wide range of social and economic factors drive the expansion of cities．
错因：句中有两个谓语动词 are 和 drive，需要将其中一个改成从句。
There are a wide range of social and economic factors which drive the expansion of cities.
大意：有很多社会和经济因素促成了城市的扩展。
13.
Rarely researcherscan provideprope_rcondIitionsforlabanimals.
错因：带有否定意义的副词放在句首，句子要倒装．
Rarely can researchers provide proper conditions for lab animals.
大意：研究者很少能够为实验室动物提供适当的条件。
14.
Although many people have strongly opposed vivisection，some other people are enthusiastically support this practice．
错因：谓语动词使用错误。are 和 support 同为动词，不能连续使用。
Although many people have strongly opposed vivisection，some other people are enthusiastically supportive of this practice．
大意：虽然很多人强烈反对活体解剖，而其他一些人则非常热切地支持这种行为。
15.
Experiments show that reducing the diversity of an ecosystem is lower the abundance of wildlife．
错因：谓语动词使用错误。is 和 lower 同为动词。
Experiments show that reducing the diversity of an ecosystem will lower the abundance of wildlife．
大意：实验显示，减少生态系统的多样性会降低野生动物的丰富性。
16.
Some people argue that climate change is beyond human controI and the best way to tackle is to stimulate economic growth so that nations will be rich enough to pay for adaptation in the future．
错因：句子不完整。tackle 是及物动词，后缺宾语。
Some people argue that climate change is beyond human control and the best way to tackle it is to stimulate economic growth so that nations will be rich enough to pay for adaptation in the future.
17.
It is difficult for businesses to produce products that satisfy the demands of all consumers and acceptable to consumers at all income levels.
错因：句子成分残缺。and 是并列连词，后面的分句没有谓语动词。
It is difficult for businesses to produce products that satisfy the demands of all consumers and are acceptable to consumers at all income levels．
大意：企业很难生产出使所有消费者都满意并可以被不同收入水平的人所接受的产品。
18.
Many people harbour misconceptions about the Impact of violence display in the media on us.
错因：此句有两个动词 harbour 和 display，在这里应该将 display 改为过去分词形式，修饰 violence。
Many people harbour misconceptions about the impact of violence displayed in the media on us．
19.
There are many distressing social trends that continue with out a break,include family breakup and declining educational standards.
错因：句中出现两个谓语动词：are 和 include，这里可以把 include 改成 including，充当状语。
There are many distressing social trends that continue without a break，including family breakup and declining educational standards．
20.
Those who from a working-class background are more likely to experience stress.
错因：从句缺谓语动词。
Those who are from a working-class background are more likely to experience stress.
大意：来自工薪阶层的人更有可能体会到生活的压力。
21.
Unless the integrity of the family is restored，and all traditional values will disappear．
错因：成分多余。unless 是一个从属连词，可以连接两个句子，不需要再用一个连词 and。
Unless the integrity of the family is restored，all traditional values will disappear．
大意：除非家庭的完整性得以恢复，否则传统价值观念就会消失。
22.
A benefit of eating a balanced diet is you can enjoy your health．
错因：句子成分残缺。is后面是个从句，应用that引导。
A benefit of eating a balanced diet is that you can enjoy your health.
大意：饮食均衡的一个好处是你可以保持健康。
时态和被动语态使用错误
23.
Scientists are interested in the benefits of a healthy balanced diet fro a long time because it appears to reduce a person's chances of developing heart disease, obesity and cancer．
错因：时态错误。当出现像 for a long time 这样的时间短语时，应该用完成时态。
Scientists have been interested in the benefits of a healthy balanced diet for a long time because it appears to reduce a person'S chances of developing heart disease，obesity and cancer．
大意：长期以来，科学家对健康平衡的饮食所带来的好处很感兴趣，因为它会减少一个人出现心脏病、肥胖症和癌症的几率。
24.
Air pollution and other kinds of pollution become worese as a result of the increasing traffic．
错因：时态错误。become 作"变得"讲时较少用于一般现在时态，在这里可以用进行时态或者完成时态。
Air pollution and other kinds of pollution have become worse as a result of the increasing traffic．
大意：空气污染和其他污染的恶化是交通流量加大的结果。
25.
Upbringing mistakes and poor living conditions can be lead to s child's problem behaviour.
错因：lead to 一般只用主动语态，表示"引起，导致"。
Upbringing mistakes and poor living conditions can lead to a child's problem behaviour.
大意：父母教育的失误和不好的生活条件会导致小孩的问题行为。
26.
It can be argued that the current scale and status of the Olympic Games is owing entirely to the developments of communication technology．
错因：owe…to…表示"将……归功于"，在此句中，应用其被动语态。
It can be argued that the current scale and status of the Olympic Games is owed entirely to the developments of communication technology．
大意：可以提出的一点是，奥林匹克运动会目前的规模和地位完全归功于通信科技的发展。
27.
There are some possible explanations as to why this problem has been happened．
错因：happen 是不及物动词，不可以用被动。
There are some possible explanations as to why this problem has happened．
大意：这个问题发生的原因有多种可能的解释。
28.
In rural areas, children are very often forced to engage in income-generating activities，even though this money earned at the expense of their schooling．
错因：earn 与 money 之间是被动关系，因此应使用其被动语态。
In rural areas, children are very often forced to engage in income-generating activities, even though this money is earned at the expense of their schooling．
大意：在乡村地区，小孩经常要参与创造收入的活动，尽管赚这些钱要以牺牲学业为代价。
29.
1t remains a matter of great concern to US that young，skilled workers are difficult to be found in country areas.
错因：easy／difficult to do 中 to 后的动词一般用主动。
It remains a matter of great concern to US that young，skilled workers are difficult to find in country areas.
大意：年轻、有技能的工作者在乡村地区很难找到，这对我们来说依然是一个值得关注的事情。
30.
One of the problems of world agriculture that has been pereisted from the middle of the last century to the present day is an increasing reliance on fertilleere and machinery．
错因：persist 是不及物动词。
One of the problems of world agriculture that has persisted from the middle of the last century to the present day is an increasing reliance on fertilisers and machinery．
大意：从上个世纪中叶到今天，世界农业持续的问题之一是对化肥和机器的使用逐渐增多。
主谓不一致
31.
We can hardly determine．which contribute more to the success of a person, innate skills or regular practice．
错因：主谓不一致。contribute 的主语是代词 which，后面谓语动词应该用单数。
We can hardly determine which contributes more to the success of a person，innate skills or regular practice．
大意：先天的技能或持续的实践，我们很难确定哪一个对人的成功贡献更大。
32.
What is ingrained during the early years usually become a habit that stay with us throughout our adult life．
错因：两个主谓一致的错误。主句谓语动词 become 的主语是 what 引导的从句，所以 become 应为单数；而 a habit 是定语从句的主语，因此其谓语动词 stay 也应该用单数。
What is ingrained during the early years usually becomes a habit that stays with us throughout our adult life．
大意：在人生早期根深蒂固的东西经常在我们成年的时候变成伴随我们的习惯。
33.
Many educators nowadays stress permitting pupils to pursue independently whatever interests them.
错因：当 whatever 充当从句主语的时候，谓语动词常用单数。
Many educators nowadays stress permitting pupils to pursue independently whatever interest them.
大意：很多教育者现在都强调允许小学生独立追求任何他们所感兴趣的东西。
34.
In many countries，one of the biggest challenges are to achieve economic growth，without causing severe harm to the environment.
错因：主谓不一致。主语是 one，因此谓语动词应该用单数。
In many countries，one of the biggest challenges is to achieve economic growth，without causing severe harm to the environment．
大意：在很多国家，最大的挑战之一是发展经济而又不严重破坏环境。
35.
The question of whether fertilisers are a curse or a blessing to farmers are still being bitterly contested．
错因：主谓不一致。主语是 question，谓语动词要用单数。
The question of whether fertilisers are a curse or a blessing to farmers is still being bitterly contested
大意：化肥对农民是好是坏的问题现在仍然处于激烈争论之中。
36.
Whenever a matter of public concern is discovered，we rely on the cooperation of the media to ensure that the information reach wide audience．
错因：information 是不可数名词，谓语动词要用单数；audience 是可数名词，要加限定词，此处表示一类观众，而不是特指的观众群，因此应加不定冠词。
Whenever a matter of public concern is discovered, we rely on the cooperation of the media to ensure that the information reaches a wide audience．
大意：每当有受公众关注的事件发生时，我们需要依靠媒体的合作来确保信息可以传送到广大的观众那里。
37.
As the world has industrialiead and its population has grown，the problem of water pollutions has intensified．
错因：pollution 是不可数名词。
As the world has industrialised and its population has grown．the problem of water pollution has intensified．
大意：由于世界的工业化和人口的增长，水污染的问题加剧了。
38.
Artists can unlock our imagination，stir us to pause，think and reflect．
错因：并列句中间应该有并列连词。
Artists can unlock our imagination and stir us to pause, think and reflect．
大意：艺术家会释放我们的想像力，促使我们停下来考虑和沉思。
39.
New constructions should not destroy the cityscape that characterise a city．
错因：主谓不一致。cityscape 是可数名词的单数，动词要用单数。
New constructions should not destroy the cityscape that characterises a city
大意：新建筑不应该破坏那些代表一个城市特点的都市风景。
40.
In some contexts，it is undeniably true that many other elements，rather than pursuit of aesthetical values，concerns building designers．
错因：主谓不一致。rather than 和 as well as 类似，当它出现的时候，谓语动词应该跟随它前面的主语来变化，这里 concern 的主语是 elements，因此，应该用复数。
In some contexts，it is undeniably true that many other elements．rather than pursuit of aesthetical values，concern building designers．
大意：在某些情形下，毫无疑问，房屋设计师更关注很多其他的因素，而不是对审美价值的追求。
41.
Maximising one's own profit usually imply working against the welfare of other people．
错因：主谓不一致。动名词作主语的时候，谓语动词要用单数。
Maximising one's own profit usually implies working against the welfare of other people.
大意：最大程度地满足我们自己的利益通常意味着要损害其他人的利益。
42.
With positive personalities，one can feel that the world is a more congenial place to live．
错因：句子成分残缺。place 是 to live 的逻辑宾语，live 为不及物动词，因此需加介词 in。
With positive personalities，one can feel that the world is a more congenial place to 1ive in.
大意：乐观的性格会使一个人觉得世界是一个更为舒适的生活场所。
词性错误
43.
Athletes are now able to play to an older age, recover more quickly from injuries and train more effectively than previously generations of athletes, because of technological development．
错因：词性错误。previously 不能修饰名词 generations，应用其形容词形式。
Athletes are now able to play to an older age，recover more quickly from injuries and train more effectively than previous generations of athletes，because of technological development．
大意：由于技术的发展，相比前几代的运动员，现在的运动员运动生涯更长，从伤病中恢复更快，而且训练也更为有效。
44.
The cost of health care in retirement is large, because people tend to be illness more frequently in later life.
错因：illness 是名词，表示"疾病"，应该改成其形容词形式 ill，"生病的"。
The cost of health care in retirement is large，because people tend to be ill more frequently in later life．
大意：退休的健康医疗费用是很大的，因为人在晚年往往更加频繁地生病。
45.
Criminal prevention can be done in any context or location, where it is in a residence, workplace，school，neighbourhood or community．
错因：criminal 是形容词，表示"犯罪的"，其名词意义表示"罪犯"，根据句意，在这里应该是强调犯罪这种事情的预防，因此应该用表示"犯罪"的名词 crime。
Crime prevention can be done in any context or location, where it is in a residence, workplace，school，neighbourhood or community．
大意：犯罪的预防可以在任何情景或者地点实现，无论是居住地、工作地、学校、街区或者社区。
46.
I reject the notion that armed police have an essential deter effect on potential offenders．
错因：deter 是动词，不能修饰名词，要改成形容词 deterrent。
I reject the notion that armed police have an essential deterrent effect on potential offenders
大意：我不接受警察配枪对潜在罪犯有震慑作用的看法。
47.
Despite the expansion in the number of medical graduates，many countries are not able to find sufficient doctors to meet theirs needs．
错因：theirs 是名词性代词，不能修饰名词，应该改成形容词性代词 their。
Despite the expansion in the number of medical graduates, many countries are not able to find sufficient doctors to meet their needs．
大意：尽管医科毕业生的数量增多，很多地区仍找不到足够的医生来满足需要。
48.
A city can be charecterised by a large network of amenities.which are provided for people's convenient，enjoyment or comfort，including shopping centres and sports facilities．
错因：convenient 是形容词，不能充当 for 的宾语。
A city can be characterised by a large network of amenities．which are provided for people's convenience，enjoyment or comfort，including shopping centres and sports facilities．
大意：一个城市的特征往往是有很多的设施，如购物中心和运动器材，这些设施为人们的方便、娱乐或舒适提供便利。
49.
The number of private vehicles is increasing at a rapidly rate，causing traffic jams and a choking atmosphere.
错因：rapidly 是副词，副词不能修饰名词。
The number of private vehicles is increasing at a rapid rate，causing traffic jams and a choking atmosphere．
大意：私人交通工具的数量正在高速增长，导致交通堵塞和让人窒息的空气环境。
50.
The way the media presents information on crimes and offenders is worth of concern， because it can easily form an opinion about criminals.
错因：worth 作形容词时意为"值……(多少)钱"，其后加 of 一般用于像 five dollars'worth of paper(价值五块钱的纸张)这样的表达；Worthy 作形容词时意为"值得……的"，worthy of concern 是固定说法，表示"值得关注的"。
The way the media presents information on crimes and offenders is worthy of concern, because it can easily form an opinion about criminals．
大意：媒体发布关于犯罪和罪犯信息的方式是值得关注的，因为它可以很轻易地形成人们对罪犯的看法。
51.
We need to realise that a large proportion of information presented by news media might have no relevant to our everyday lives.
错因：relevant 是形容词，不能放在 have 后面作宾语。
We need to realise that a large proportion of information presented by news media might have no relevance to our everyday lives．
52.
Watching television has become a way of life, therefore，its effects on viewers have drawn much more attention than ever before．
错因：therefore 是副词，而不是连词，不能够连接两个完整的句子。
Watching television has become a way of life；therefore，its effects on viewers have drawn much more attention than ever before．
53.
The three main dead diseases in today's society，heart disease，cancer and stroke，can be largely prevented．with lifestyle chages, such as adopting a low-fat vegetarian diet，refraining from smoking and alcohol abuse and getting regular exercise.
错因：单词使用错误。dead 表示"死了的"，应该用 deadly，表示"致命的"。
The three main deadly diseases in today's society，heart disease，cancer and stroke，can be largely prevented．with lifestyle chages, such as adopting a low-fat vegetarian diet，refraining from smoking and alcohol abuse and getting regular exercise.
大意：现代社会的三个主要致命疾病——心脏病、癌症还有中风——大都可以通过改变生活方式来预防，比如吃低脂肪的素食、不抽烟不酗酒以及经常做运动。
54.
The decline of manufacturing and the contraction of male manual jobe are among those emerge trends in the employment market.
错因：emerge 是动词，在这里需要改成现在分词 emerging，形容 trends。
The decline of manufacturing and the contraction of male manual jobs are among those emerging trends in the employment market．
大意：制造业的衰退和男性体力工作的减少成为雇佣市场的一些最新趋势。
55.
Because of economic transform，many people need immediate reeducation for employment．
错因：transform是动词，在这里要用名词transformation。
Because of economic transformation，many people need immediate reeducation for employment．
大意：因为经济转型的原因，很多人为了工作需要马上接受再教育。