搭配错误
1
原题：
It can be stated that children living in the families of poor economic condition have less possibilities to finish schooling and find a decent job.
错因：
possibility 为可数名词，不能用 little 修饰，应改为 few 的比较级 fewer。
改正：
It can be stated that children living in the families of poor economic condition have fewer possibilities to finish schooling and find a decent job．
大意：
可以说家庭经济条件不好的小孩完成学业和找到好工作的机会要更/相对较低。
2
原题：
Job skills and social skills will be improved，which is considered as mainly advantage of working for some time before obtaining a college education.
错因：
mainly 是副词，不能修饰名词；此处的 before 为连词，后面应跟完整的句子。
改正：
Job skills and social skills will be improved，which is considered as the main advantage of working for some time before one obtains a college education．
大意：
上大学前工作一段时间的主要优点是工作技能和社会技能都能有所提高。
3
原题：
Upbringing is considered successful only if both the child's biological and psychological needs are properly catered.
错因：
cater 作"迎合，满足……需要"讲时为不及物动词，后需加 for。
改正：
Upbringing is considered successful only if both the child's biological and psychological needs are properly catered for．
大意：
只有当小孩的生理和心理需要被恰当地满足时，父母对小孩的抚育才可以说是成功的。
4
原题：
Children are now very competent experts on use the Internet -- but not on how to live in the real world．
错因：
use 是动词，不能充当介词的宾语，要用动名词。
改正：
children are now very competent experts on using the Internet--but not on how to 1ive in the real world．
大意：
现在孩子们在使用网络上都是专家，而在现实生活中则不是。
5
原题：
Aumoritarian parenting style is marked by set clear and unbending rules and apply strict punishment to children's misbehaviours.
错因：
by 是介词，后面应该加动名词或者名词。
改正：
Aumoritarian parenting style is marked by setting clear and unbending rules and applying strict punishment to children's misbehaviours.
大意：
专制式教育方法的特点是设立明确和死板的规则，对孩子的错误行为实施严厉的惩罚。
6
原题：
In the rapid changing economic and social context，educators need to find ways of integrating learning into the workplace.
错因：
rapid 是形容词，不能修饰现在分词 changing。
改正：
In the rapidly changing economic and social context，educators need to find ways ofintegrating learning into the workplace．
大意：
在经济和社会环境快速变化的社会里，教育者需要找到将学习融入工作中的方法。
7
原题：
According to some educators，the goal of teaching is helping students learn what they need to know to live a successful life．
错因：
当主语是 goal，objective，purpose 和 mission 等这些词语的时候，表语应该用不不定式，对主语起补充说明的作用；不定式作表语一般表示目的、原因等，特别是表示将来的动作。
改正：
According to some educators，the goal of teaching is to help students learn what they need to know to live a successful life．
大意：
根据一些教育者的看法，教育的目标是帮助学生学习获得成功人生所需要知道的东西。
8
原题：
Women are now able to take control of their lives and take a much active part in the world．
错因：
much 一般不能直接修饰形容词，而是修饰形容词的比较级。
改正：
Women are now able to take control oftheir lives and take a much more active part in the world．
大意：
女人现在可以掌握自己的人生，在世界上扮演更为活跃的角色。
9
原题：
Traditionally，the police force is typically a male-dominating domainconsidered a minoritygroup.
错因：
分词错误。dominate 应该用过去分词的形式，与 domain 之间是被动关系。
改正：
Traditionally,the police force is typically a male—dominated domain and women are considered a minority group．
大意：
从传统上讲，警察队伍是男性主导的领域，而女性被认为是少数群体。
10
原题：
Improved medical technology and health awareness are allowing us live longer.
错因：
惯用法。allow 的用法是 allow sb. to do。
改正：
Improved medical technology and health awareness are allowing us to live longer.
大意：
先进的医疗技术和健康意识让我们的寿命更长。
11
原题：
The tempo of life in country areas has quickened as result of urbanisation．
错因：
as a result 是固定搭配．
改正：
The tempo of life in country areas has quickened as a result of urbanisation
大意：
由于城市化进程，乡村地区的生活节奏已经加快了
12
原题：
The second factor that induces people flock to the city is the high availability of facilities and amenities there.
错因：
induce sb．to do sth．是固定搭配，不定式作复合宾语，这里少了一个 to。
改正：
The second factor that induces people to flock to the city is the high availability of facilities and amenities there
大意：
第二个吸引人们涌入城市的因素是城市里可享用的设备和设施资源。
13
原题：
Continued efforts made by researchers open up the possibility of finding acure of some deadly diseases．
错因：
介词使用错误。a cure 后习惯上跟 for。
改正：
Continued efforts made by researchers open up the possibility of finding a cure for some deadly diseases．
大意：
研究人员所做的持续努力为找到一些致命疾病的治愈方法增加了机会。
14
原题：
The more waste we generate, the more waste we have to dispose.
错因：
dispose 当作"丢掉，处理"讲时，是不及物动词，需要加 of.
改正：
The more waste we generate，the more waste we have to dispose of．
大意：
我们制造的垃圾越多，需要处理的垃圾就越多。
15
原题：
As the development of technology,we will discover an alternative to resource-intensive and wasteful industry，which allows us to use resources sparingly and cause minimum damage to the environment．
错因：
as 作连词时后面只能加完整的主谓结构，作介词时表示"像……"或者"处于某种状态"此句要表示"随着..."，因此此处应该用 with。
改正：
With the development of technology，we will discover an alternative to resource—intensiveand wasteful industry，which allows us to use resources sparingly and cause minimum damage to the environment．
大意：
随着科技的发展，我们将找到取代资源密集型、浪费型工业的替代品，这可以让我们节约能源。对环境造成最小的伤害。
16
原题：
Some video games might lead children to associate pleasure and success with their ability to cause suffering to other．
错因：
单词使用错误。other 是形容词性的代词，表示"其他的"，介词 to 后需要跟名词应
该用名词性的代词 others。
改正：
Some video games might lead children to associate pleasure and success with their ability to cause suffering to others．
大意：
一些电子游戏引导小孩将自己的快乐和成功与他们导致别人痛苦的能力联系在一起。
17
原题：
Many media are able to transfer information with high speed and accuracy.
错因：
常与 speed 和 accuracy 搭配的介词为 at 和 with；此外，并列连词 and 前后的语法成分应一致。
改正：
Many media are able to transfer information at high speed and with accuracy.
18
原题：
In the view of the fact that it can negatively impact the audience's behaviour，a detaileddescription of violent crime in the media should be restricted.
错因：
常用搭配。in view of 为常用搭配，意思是"考虑到……"。
改正：
In view of the fact that it can negatively impact the audience's behaviour，a detaileddescription of violent crime in the media should be restricted．
19
原题：
Increased life pressure and the climbing unemployment rate have remained as some of the major reasons to account for people's depression.
错因：
在本句中，increase 应用现在分词形式修饰 life，表示"逐渐增加的"。
改正：
lncreasing life pressure and the climbing unemployment rate have remained as some of themajor reasons to account for people's depression.
大意：
逐渐增加的生活压力和不断上升的失业率一直是人们压抑的几种主要原因。
20
原题：
Increased leisure time does not necessarily benefit from the well-being of individuals， because periods of inactivity have actually been prolonged.
错因：
benefit 表示"对……有利"的时候是及物动词，不需要加介词。
改正：
Increased leisure time does not necessarily benefit the well-being of indiViduals，becauseperiods of inactivity have actually been prolonged.
大意：
休闲时间的增加未必一定有利于人的健康和快乐，因为人们不运动的时间实际上被延长了。
21
原题：
One the nagative side,openness and honesty sometimes lead to people express extremeopinions more openly.
错因：
leadto 的 to 是介词，后面不能加动词原形。
改正：
0n the negative side，openiless and honesty sometimes lead to people expressing extremeopinions more openly．
22
原题：
Improper use of substances，alcoholism and unhealthy lifestyles are among other problems which cause people have pressure.
错因：
cause 和 pressure 这两个词使用不正确。
改正：
Improper use of substances，alcoholism and unhealthy lifestyles are among other problemswhich cause people to feel under pressure．
大意：
药物的不恰当使用、酗酒和不健康的生活方式是会导致人们感到压力的其中一些原因。
23
原题：
Overworking links to many adverse health effects, including profound fatigues， back pain，general anxiety， headaches，and occupational diseases．
错因：
link 是及物动词，不需要加介词。一般来说，当 link 表示"……和……相关"的时，其搭配是 be linked to。
改正：
Overworking is linked to many adverse health effects，including profound fatigues，backpain，general anxiety，headaches，and occupational diseases．
24
原题：
The benefits of job-hopping are taking on a new challenge，which can be translated into an initiative for self-development，enriched experiences and possibly higher incomes．
错因：
动词are不准确。taking on a new challenge只是benefits中的一个，应该改用include表示"包括"。
改正：
The benefits of job-hopping include taking on a new challenge，which can be translated intoan initiative for self-development，enriched experiences and possibly higher incomes．
大意：
跳槽的一个好处是接受一个新的挑战，这可以转化成自我提高的动力、经验的积累以及收入的提高。
从句错误
25
原题：
Although the computer cannot replace the teacher，but it can be used every now and then to ease teachers'workload．
错因：
although 和 but 不能连用。
改正：
Although the computer cannot replace the teacher，it can be used every now and then to ease teachers'workload．
大意：
虽然电脑不能完全代替老师，但是它可以时而被用来减轻老师的工作量。
26
原题：
A university is now multi-ethnical and multi-cultural，which students from all over the world study together．
错因：
后面从句中关系词应作状语，所以此处应改为关系副词 where。
改正：
A university is now multi-ethnical and multi—cultural，where students from all over the world study together．
大意：
当今，大学是一个多元文化、多种族的场所，在那儿学习的学生来自世界各地。
27
原题：
The debate which is whether or not human nature is the key factor in criminal production has attracted public attention.
错因：
根据句子结构，本句不能为定语从句。可以将本句改为 debate+介词 over／about+宾语从句。
改正：
The debate over／about whether or not human nature is the key factor in criminalproduction has attracted public attention．
大意：
关于人的本性是否是导致犯罪的主要因素的争论引起人们的广泛关注。
28
原题：
The age ofretirement should be raised progressively because trends in life expectancy.
错因：
because 作连词时后跟完整句子，如果跟短语则应该用 because of.
改正：
The age ofretirement should be raised progressively because of trends in life expectancy.
大意：
由于人均寿命的变化，退休的年龄一定会逐步提升。
29
原题：
Some senior people might raise the question as to why should they be forced out of employment because of age.
错因：
why 在这里引导一个从句，应该用陈述句语序。
改正：
Some senior people might raise the question as to why they should be forced out of employment because of age．
大意：
年长的人或许会提出质疑----为什么他们一定要因为年龄而被迫离职。
30
原题：
What we should bear it in mind is to spread wealth to the impoverished countryside．
错因：
成分多余。本句的主语为 what we should bear it in mind，而 what 充当了从句中的宾语，因此 it 是多余成分。
改正：
What we should bear in mind is to spread wealth to the impoverished countryside．
大意：
我们需要记住的是将财富带到贫穷的乡村地区。
31
原题：
One of the main arguments against advertising is its giving an exaggerated description of something which is not existed．
错因：
something 作先行词的时候，后面只能用 that；exist 是不及物动词，不能用被动。
改正：
One of the main arguments against advertising is its giving an exaggerated descnption of something that does not exist．
大意：
反对广告的一个主要观点是广告夸大一些并不存在的东西。
32
原题：
In movies，violence is used as a solution to problems, which are contradictory in a society which values non-violent solutions.
错因：
句中第一层从句的先行词不是 problems，而是前面的整个句子。
改正：
In movies，vio1ence is used as a solution to problems，which is contradictory in a society which values non-violent solutions．
大意：
在电影里，暴力被用作解决问题的方法，这和重视非暴力解决方法的社会是矛盾的。
33
原题：
The government，which is expected to serve the citizen around its country, has the responsibility to reduce or eliminate citizens'fear of vilent crime by any available means．
错因：
关系代词使用错误。应该用 who，而不是 which。
改正：
The government，who is expected to serve the citizen around its country，has theresponsibility to reduce or eliminate citizens'fear of violent crime by any available means．
大意：
作为为人民服务的机构，政府有责任通过任何可行的途径去减少或消除任何暴力犯罪引起的公众恐慌。
34
原题：
Life today is filled with sources of stress, most of that cannot be avoided.
错因：
非限制性定语从句不能用 that。
改正：
Life today is filled with sources ofstress，most of which cannot be avoided
大意：
现在的生活充满着各种压力源，其中的大部分是不可能避免的。
35
原题：
As the modern transport used widely, it is possible that people can travel everywhere in the world.
错因：
as 是连词，后面应该加完整的句子。
改正：
As the modern transport is being used widely，it is possible that people can travel everywhere in the world．
大意：
随着现代交通工具被广泛使用，人们周游世界成为可能。
36
原题：
Although in theory，those who stick to a strict vegetarian diet never eat meat or fish，but in practice，many foods they are eating contain meat or fish.
错因：
although 和 but 不能连用。
改正：
In theory，those who stick to a strict vegetarian diet never eat meat or fish,but inpractice,many foods they are eating contain meat or fish．
大意：
理论上，素食主义者从不吃肉类和鱼类，但实际上他们吃的很多食物中都包含肉或鱼。
分词错误
37
原题：
Traditionally，the police force is typically a male-dominating domain and women areconsidered a minority group.
错因：
分词错误。dominate 应该用过去分词的形式，与 domain 之间是被动关系。
改正：
Traditionally,the police force is typically a male—dominated domain and women are considered a minority group．
大意：
从传统上讲，警察队伍是男性主导的领域，而女性被认为是少数群体。
38
原题：
Urban sprawl is a form of metropolitan growth, resulted from the combined affects of economic，social，and political forces．
错因：
分词使用错误。分词的选择参照其所对应的主语，如果是主语主动发出的动作就用现在分词，这里主句的主语是 urban sprawl，因此应该用现在分词 resulting from。
改正：
Urban sprawl is a form of metropolitan growth，resulting from the combined effects of economic，social，and political forces．
大意：
城市扩张是大城市发展的一种形式，主要由经济、社会和政治力量的共同影响而产生。
39
原题：
Reports in recent years on the widen gap between urban and rural areas have raised public awareness on the importance of education for rural people．
错因：
widen 是动词，不能修饰名词，要改成现在分词。
改正：
Reports in recent years on the widening gap between urban and rural areas have raised public awareness on the importance of education for rural people．
大意：
在最近几年，关于城乡差距加大的报告已经提高了人们对农村教育重要性的意识。
40
原题：
Industrialiestion has been responsible for the most radical of the environmental changes causing by humans.
错因：
cause 与 changes 之间是被动关系，因此应该用过去分词 caused。
改正：
Industrialisation has been responsible for the most radical of the environmental changes caused by humans．
大意：
工业化应该为人类所造成的最根本的环境变化负责。
41
原题：
Then expanding gap between rich and poor and increasing environmental degradation are among the major problems faced the countries in the developing world.
错因：
在这里 face 作"面临"讲，与 problem 是主动关系，因此应该用现在分词 facing。
改正：
The expanding gap between rich and poor and increasing environmental degradation are among the major problems facing the countries in the developing world．
大意：
发展中国家面临的主要问题中包括贫富差距的加大和环境的不断恶化。
42
原题：
When people are exposed to the violence in movies，especially the movies acted by a popular celebrity，they are more likely to copy the violent acts，considered them acceptable and adorable．
错因：
这里的 consider 应该用现在分词，因为主句的主语是观众，而观众与 consider 之间为主动关系。
改正：
When people are exposed to the violence in movies．especially the movies acted by a popular celebrity，they are more likely to copy the violent acts，considering them acceptable and adorable．